fictional narrative

once upone a time a litle gril called triana, love to visit her grandma, her grandma live in a beautiful and big a house, her house has beautifuls rooms but this house has a misterious basement, the basement was thw only ugly place of this house.her grandma didn't let her enter to the bassement, the grandma's excuse was that the basement was dirty and dark to enter. but that was not the real reason.was because in  the bassement there was misterious and dangerous things. but anyway trianawent the basement and founda beautifull doll, she likes to pley whith this doll. one day she went to the river and start playing with her doll and in this moment his grandmother came outand saw her playing with the doll she scolding her grandougther and ask to her why she went there in spite of the warning. after she excused for her actiun aslo to grandma why she can't gi thre was in this moment the old wome told her the doll story  this doll has my spirit if someone take this or worst stealtit i can die.
 when i was a litle girl i had a temible sickness i could die but my mom made a deal with a indian woman who promise for money save my life she indian sold to my mom this doll but the main condition was  it has to be apart the world near to her but no body can reach if someone take the doll, the energy of my life could be extingcished,so promise me no body is going to know my story triana understand the grandmother reasm and help to her grand with the secret.
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my opinion abuot gulliver's travels

Gulliver's travels is a book that needs that's the reader be imaginative, I'd like the creativity of the things that the author Jonathan  Swift can imagine for example Lilliput, i think when the author created this place he needed much imagination because he imagine the place the people the situations the laws and the names ¡he created everything ! create this is a hard job. the book has beautifull and wonderfull landscpes,this book is some  what entertainment but I dont like so muchy  because fiction is not   my favourite kind of stories,in spite of  it  Gullivers travel is interesting..